大作文1（44mins, 361 words）

Some people think that robots are very important to human's future development, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been much debate about whether robots are significant for human in the future. From where I stand, I firmly believe that robots do play an important role in our life.

Some people believe that robots occupied a very important place in the future human development. They have their good points to support the views. First, people can work more comfortably with the help of robots. Compared working by themselves with working with robots, the former can be considerably hard and makes people tired, and the latter provides a comfortable way which does not need human to do some very boring and hard work.（15分钟） Second, people's life will become more convenient. For example, by using cooking robots, people do not need to cook by themselves, and they do not have to waste time on the traffic thanks to the robot driver.（21分钟） So, for the above given reasons, people can have a more better development by robots in the future.（这里写第二段的时候回来补了一下，防止走题）

Others, however, propose that it is dangerous for human to use robots in the future, and society would be badly affected with the following reasons.（23分钟） On the one hand, it can be obviously seen that many people will lose their jobs due to robots. In other words, robots are so excellent that they can replace many work like taxi driver, factory worker and so on, as a result, it is hard for people to get jobs, which is not good for society（29分钟） On the other hand, robots can be dangerous. If one day they have the ability of thinking, it seems hard to control them by human, which means that robots can do whatever they do with a strong metal body, or even hunt human.（34分钟）

In my opinion, I firmly consider that people will have a better development with the help of robots. First, the job issues can be solved because outdated jobs would be replaced by robots, whereas many new and comfortable jobs will be created. Second, robots' programs are designed by human, which means that people can control robots via coding.（41分钟） Thus, a new comfortable life can be seen by people as a result of the development of robots.（44分钟）

大作文2（39mins, 273 words）

The level of noise around us is constantly increasing, and is affecting the quality of our lives.

What cause the noise?

What should be done about it?

Nowadays, noise issue is becoming more and more serious than before, which is really affected our living quality. From where I stand, two reaons can be seen and governments should do something to solve it.（3分钟）

The mean reason is that cars become popular with the development of societies, which produce a lot of noise. To be more specific, when a road meets traffic jam, many cars behind the queue of the road would probably use speaker, which is so aloud that badly disturb the citizen near the road. However, noise can also be produced without the traffic jam. If a lot of cars pass through a high-speed road, the flowing air would cause noise.（16分钟）In addition, more and more factories are built in the city, and produce noise. For example, many huge machines in the factories make a lot of annoying voices, which with very high frequency.（第三段写到一半又来补充一个原因）

In my opinion, governments should take the responsibilities of noise. First, they can improve the traffic flow. For example, a part of cars can be limited depend the time of a day in some roads with busy traffic. Apart from that, governments can built more roads to fight with the growing numbers of cars.（25分钟，转去第二段补充原因）Second, policies about factory noise should be make. For example, factories with large volume of noise must be move to the suburb, while others in the city should use some equipment to reduce the noise.

In conclusion, growing numbers of cars and factories are the reasons of the more and more serious noise. What's more, governments should make some changes in the traffic and factories to fight with the increasing noise.（38分钟）

大作文3（40mins, 294 words）

An increasing number of developing countries are expanding tourist industries.

Why is it the case?

Is it a positive development?

这篇写着写着，感觉有点开始偏题，就是说，感觉第二个问题和第一个问题存在一些重合的地方。于是在一边回答第二个问题的时候，也对第一个问题的回答进行了改进，比如加上了一些topic words来点题。

主体前两段着重写 为什么？——是因为：发展中国家“想”，并“需要”

主体第三段回答问题二——是积极的趋势，其中第一点有点与前面的重合，但是我改写了一点点；第二点是从全世界出发，这种行为促进了文化交流，让别的国家了解文化，促进世界的和平发展。

Nowadays, more and more developing countries would like to expand their tourist industries. From where I stand, two reasons can be seen, and I consider that it is a positive trend.

To begin with, developing countries want to gain a lot of incomes with the help of tourist industries. As we all known, those countries are developing, which means that they need a stack of money to support their new construction like building a subway.(10分钟) In this case, if more and more tourists from other areas come to these countries, it can sharply produce a large number of consumptions, which occupied an important part of the countries income.（16分钟）

In addition, the second reason is that developing countries need to grow tourist industries to improve the international position.（在32分进行修改） An excellent tourism has the ability to attract a lot of foreign tourist, which makes the country famous and popular in the world. Besides, the upside of the country like delicious foods, meaningful culture can be seen by many people around the world, which makes a good impression on other countries.（26分钟）Therefore, in a competitive international environment, the developing country receive more attention.（后来加上的；29分钟）

In my opinion, it is a positive development. For the developing countries, it is necessary to earn more money. If tourism become stronger, the country will have less stress on income. What's more, expanding tourist industries is a straight method to improve international position. As for the whole world, the expanding tourist industries in developing countries can let other countries learn different cultures, which is positive for improving peace and development of mankind（这个词组是查的...；38分钟）.

In conclusion, money and international position are the reasons why developing countries are expanding tourist industries. Furthermore, it is a positive thing for those countries and the peace of world.（40分钟）