小作文1(25mins, 296 words)
题源:剑14 Test2
The bar chart and table illustrate the export earnings (billions) of one nation in five categories, and the percentage change in values of each category from 2015 to 2016.(3分钟30秒)Overall, the category of petroleum products was always the highest value of exports.(5分钟)
According to the bar chart, it can be obviously seen that petroleum products occupied the highest position, with its figure approximately from 61 in 2015 to 62 in 2016. In contrast, the type of textiles experienced the lowest earning (31 approximately) in 2015. However, it increased sharply in 2016, getting its figure about 32, which was the same value with the type of agricultural products in 2016, and much higher than that in 2015. As for the category of engineered goods, it was 57 in 2015 and about 62 in 2016. Besides, the type of gems and jewellery was the middle rank of all types, which was around 42 in 2015 and 41 in 2016.
Turning to the table, all the value of categories were increased during 2015 and 2016 during the given time except the category of gems and jewellery. To be more specific, textiles grew by 15.24%, which met the highest rise. However, it can be seen that the type of agricultural products rose least, with its figure only 0.81%. As for the categories of petroleum products and engineered goods, they increased by 3% and 8.5% respectively. In addition, a noticeable drop can be noted in the category of gems and jewellery, which was 5.18%.(23分钟)
To sum up, the category of petroleum products was still the highest value of export in all categories. Besides, it can be obviously noted that textiles increased most sharply, whereas the biggest drop can be seen in the category of gems and jewellery.(25分钟)
(感觉文章有写不完的数据,所以写了好多字...)
(the XXX of ... ,XXX要加复数吗?E.g. the group of A, B, C...、the types of A, B, C)
小作文2(23mins, 253 words)
题源:剑14 Test1
The pie charts illustrate the average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA. Overall, breakfast includes the lowest percentages of all three types of nutrients which are not good for people's health if eaten too much.(4分钟)
According to the pie charts, it can be seen that dinner account the highest percentages which are 43% and 37% respectively in sodium and saturated fat in all nutrients. However, in the type of added sugar, snacks become the biggest part of that instead of dinner, with its figure 42%. Besides, a weaker but still strong percentage can be seen in lunch in the categories of sodium and saturated fat, which are 29% and 26% respectively. As for the category of added sugar, dinner accounted for 23%, which rank the second high part in all nutrients.(14分钟)
In contrast, in the terms of sodium and saturated fat, breakfast and snacks occupy the smallest part. To be more specific, breakfast and snacks account the same percentage with 14% in sodium. As for the category of saturated fat, the percentage (21%) of snacks is higher than that (16%) of breakfast. However, there are quiet differences in the category of added sugar. In can be seen that breakfast and lunch have the less average percentages, which are 16% and 19% respectively.(20分钟)
To sum up, dinner includes the high percentage of sodium and saturated fat, and snacks occupy the biggest part of added sugar. It may be unhealthy if eating too much such nutrients.(23分钟)
大作文(34mins, 385 words)
In some countries, more and more adults choose to continue to live with their parents after they graduate and have found jobs.
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?(社会)
Nowadays, increasing number of adults who have been graduated and found jobs can be seen that they choose to continue to live with their parents. From where I stand, I firmly believe that it is a positive trend.(4分钟)
On the one hand, some people believe that a lot of disadvantages can be seen if more and more graduated and working adults continue to live with their parents. They have some good points to support their view. Firstly, conflict can be cause because of different habit. For example, many adults who are just graduated may like to have abundant night life like going to bar at night, whereas parents are older and would like to have a healthy daily habit such as getting up early and going to bed early. Thus, different life style may cause conflict and badly affect each other. In addition, living with parents may make the young adult rely on them. As we all known, parents always care about their children very well, such as making a good meal for them in everyday and giving money to support them. However, this may cause them hard to be independent, which means that adults may probably become lazy and can not manage themselves well. Thus, it is not good for adult to live with parents after graduated and found jobs.(20分钟)
About this phenomenon, I consider that the advantages outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason is that living with parents can decrease the pressure of living. One fact is that the cost of buying new house is becoming more and more expensive, so living with parents can save a lot of money and do not need to care about where to stay. The other reason is that living with parents can look after each other. As for parents, they may having some diseases and may become lonely due to the increasing age. However, if their children can live with them, they can be accompanied and cared about. In the other hand, after a hard work in a day, adults can just go home to have a meal and relax instead of making meal by own.(32分钟)
In conclusion, considering that living with parents can look after each other can reduce the pressure of living, I firmly believe that the advantages of the trend outweigh its disadvantages.(34分钟)(结尾还需要再论证嘛?还是直接点名自己的观点就可以了?)