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2023/02/14~15小作文*2+大作文*2 By FXIT on 13th February 2023 10:21:35 PM

小作文1(21mins, 264 words)

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题源:剑13 Test4


The two maps illustrate the changes of a university sports centre between present and future. Overall, there are a lot of differences during the given time.(1分钟30秒)

According to the map about the university sports centre at present, it can be obviously seen that a large indoor area in the center, which is between with two outdoor courts in the east and west. To be more specific of the internal area, the reception can be clearly noted near the door. Across the reception, there is a 25m pool in the center. In the north of that, a gym is built, and there is a changing room in the west of the pool, with a long seating area being opposite to it.(10分钟)

Move on to the second map in the future, the two outdoor courts will be removed, and the indoor area will be much expanded with a longer width. Looking into more details, there will be a leisure pool and a new changing room in the west side of the sports centre, whereas two dance studios and a changing room will be built in the east side. Around the pool, the gym will be longer than before, and a new-built sports hall will be easily seen beside the seating area. In addition, there will be sports shop and cafe in the southwest and southeast area respectively of the reception.(18分钟30秒)

To sum up, the indoor area of the university sports centre will be much larger than before, with many new-built facilities here. The function of the sports centre will be more abundant than before.(21分钟)


小作文2(25mins, 263 words)

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题源:剑13 Test3


The bar chart illustrate the top ten ranks of ten countries for the electric production and consumption (billion kWh) in 2014. Overall, both the production and consumption in China ranked the highest of all countries.(3分钟)(这个单位可以补充在这嘛...)

According to the chart, it can be obviously seen that China had the most value of electric production (5398) and consumption (5322) in 2014. A weaker but still strong rank can be noted in United States, with its figure 4099 in production and 3866 in consumption, experiencing the biggest difference between the two value. As for Russia, its production was 1057, and the value of consumption (1038) was similar to the value of that. The other countries ranked the least of the top five were Japan and India, the former had 936.2 in production and 856.7 in consumption, and the latter had less production (871) and consumption (698.7).(16分钟)

In contrast, Korea, Rep. ranked least, with 485.1 production and 449.5 consumption. In the county of Canada, its production was 618.9 and consumption was 499.9. As for France and Brazil, they enjoyed the similar figure, which were around 550 in production and approximately 450 in consumption. A obviously difference between production and consumption can be seen in Germany, which had a 526.6 production but a less figure (582.5) in consumption.(21分钟30秒)

Overall, the biggest difference between production and consumption can be seen in United States, and Germany was the only country which consumption was higher than production. Besides, China ranked first in both production and consumption, whereas Korea. Rep. was the least.(25分钟)


大作文1(38mins, 335 words)

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The structure of families and the role of its members are changing gradually.

What kinds of changes are they?

Do these changes have a positive effect or negative effects?(家庭结构变化)


这篇文章感觉话题还是挺抽象的,也不知道也没有写离题。主要是确实还挺难想的。

Nowadays, gradually changes can be seen in the structure of families and the role of its members. From where I stand, I consider that the changes in the numbers of family members and the structure of incomes(前后要加s嘛) can be noted, and it is a negative effect.(5分钟)(有点卡在I consider找changes那里,感觉这个题目的开头必须得写直接写出原因呀,不能像以前那种含糊带过)

One obvious change in the structure of families is that the numbers of family members are less than before. For example, in China, people would like to have more children before because of the custom, so families may had both brothers and sisters. However, with the growing cost of nurture children, people may be unwilling to have many children, or even do not want to give birth to children. Thus, the numbers of family members is seen a decrease. Another change can be seen in the role of members in family, which is about the income. In previous families, the main responsibility of woman is look after the children and make a good meal, while man is required to work for money. In contrast, woman and man all have to work in order to support their family nowadays due to the increasing living cost.(25分钟)

About above changes, I consider that they have a negative effect. Firstly, these changes will cause aging problem in some cases. If more and more people even do not want to give birth to children, the population of the young will drop gradually, which means that the power of creativity of the country will be cut down due to the aging problem. In addition, the changes will make people under high pressure. For example, if woman and man are all required to work, nobody can have enough time to care about their children and other details of family, and people may find that it is hard to continue their favourite interests.(35分钟)

In conclusion, the numbers of family and the structure of incomes are changing gradually. Considering that the aging problem will be caused and people may live under pressure, it is not a positive changes.(38分钟)


大作文2(39mins, 358 words)

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In many counties women are not able to join the army to share equal opportunities as men to serve the country, but some people think women can be a member of the arm, navy and air-force.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(女性参军问题)


这篇也挺难的,题目理解上不太清楚是women在军队没有同等机会,还是说women不允许参军。

There has been much debate about whether women can be a member of the army to share equal chances as men to serve the nation. From where I stand, I consider that women can join the army like arm, navy and air-force.(4分钟30秒)(感觉不太好改写...)

On the one hand, some people believe that women should not share the qual opportunities to protect their country. They have some points to support their view. Firstly, women do not have the innate advantage of strength compared with men. As we all known, working in army needs high physical quality such as run fast continually. If women are encouraged to join the army, it is probably that they can not keep the same level of physical strength like men, which may cause the fail of war. In addition, especially in the time of war, women are considered as the hope of newborn life. In the custom, women always do better in look after their baby and the old man in family, whereas men are good at fighting naturally. Thus, it is a good choice that men should attend the army, while women should stay to care their family.(24分钟)

However, in my opinion, I believe that women should enjoy the equal opportunities as men to serve the country nowadays. The main reason is that with the development of technology, strength is not the only factors to win a war. In contrast, with the help of different kinds of computers and machines(都要加s吗), people are required to learn how to control it well and focus on the information screen. Thus, clever and professional should be more important. Another reason is that some tasks in the army are more suitable for women rather than men. For example, women have the innate ability of patient and understanding others, which is necessary in questioning prisoner. Therefore, each sex of people are required equally.(36分钟)

In conclusion, considering that strength is not the only factors in today's war, and women have the innate ability of patient to do better in some tasks, I firmly believe that women can join the army to have the equal opportunities as men to serve the country.(39分钟)

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